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Wysany: 2016-09-24, 20:18   Angielski - ktoś sprawdzi?

Czy mógłby ktoś sprawdzić moją pracę z angielskiego? Przygotowuję to sobie do prezentacji i za każdym razem gdy to czytam znajduję masę idiotycznych błędów. Poprawiam - czytam znowu - znajduję kolejne.

Counter-Strike: Global Offensive (CS:GO) is multiplayer, first person shooter game, released in 2012. It's already e-sport.
We play as Counter Terrorists or Terrorists, and we must complete different objectives to win.
Game Mods:
Unranked:
Deathmatch - one game takes 10 minutes, We can kill people only from opposing team. There are 8 players in one team. We get points for killing. We don't have to have money to choose weapon. We respawns after every death. The person with the most points wins after 10 minutes.
Demolition: We can't buy weapon, we get it for killing. There are 20 rounds. After 10 rounds, the sides switches and players start again. One round takes 1:30 if anybody plant the bomb. There are CT and T, 5 players in each one. The target is to eliminate the opposing team, or, in the case of terrorists detonate bomb, and in the case of CT - defuse it. In this game mode there is only one bombsite (bombsite means place when terrorists can plant bomb). The first team which won 11 rounds is the winner.
Arms Race: There are 5 players in every team. We can't buy weapon there too. Weapons are the rewards and we get them after every 2 kills. The last we can get is gold knife. The person who kill someone with a gold knife first - wins.
Classic Casual: It's 8 vs 8 mode. There are 15 round. After 8 rounds, the sides switch. Our objective is to kill all enemies or - for T plant and protect the bomb, and for CT defuse the bomb. One round - without planted bomb takes 3 minutes. In this mode we have defuser and bulletproof vest with helmet for free. The rest of weapon we can buy for money which we get for every round and every kill. We also get money for planting the bomb. The first team which won 8 rounds is the winner.
Ranked:
Competitive: It's 5 vs 5 match with 30 rounds. After 15 rounds, the sides switch. One round without planted bomb takes 2 minutes. Our objectives are the same as in Classic Casual mode. We can buy equipment for earned money. It's the only one mode where we can kill our teammate and we can block each other.
In competitive mode there are few maps where our objective is to rescue the hostage and move it to CT base, or - if we'r T, our objective is don't allow to rescue the hostage.
What's important, in every mode bomb explodes after 45 seconds from planting. Defusing without defuse kit takes 10 seconds, and with that - 5 seconds.

Ranks:
Counter Strike has Elo ranking system. It means we get rank for how we play, not for how much we play. In every ranked round we can get MVP star. It's a prize for the best player of round. Stats aren't the most important. We can get MVP for planting or defusing bomb too. After all match MVP pointes changes for Elo points. If we play bad, we'll fall from our rank. We can't see our points, so we don't know when we'll get new rank.
It's hard to get ranked if you play with random players, because you can have hackers and smurfs in enemies team, and only kids or russians in your team.
Smurf is player who has a better rank on other Steam account. He plays with lower ranks from second account.
Hackers use wallhack and aimbot. They see us through the wall and shoot only headshots.
Kids are the most toxic players in this game, and russians always have fun of making noise and doing stupid things. The most players see them like that:

Maps:
There are 25 official maps, but they are available in different modes. For example we can't play ranked match only on 15 maps. I will show you the most popular competitive maps.
It's very important to know every place on map, teammates must communicate. Players should know names of places. The most important on every map is: short, middle, long, A and B site, CT spawn and T spawn.

Equipment:
There are different weapons for CT and T. Only some of them are in both teams. But every team has 6 groups in shop: pistols, heavy, SMG, rifles, equipment (inhibitor, bulletproof vest, helmet, defuse kit) and grenades (smoke, flash, decoy, Molotov, explosive). Every weapon is different while using this.
For a good play, we can get skins or cases. To open a case we must have a key. Generally they cos about 2 euros per one. We can draw one of 6 blue, 4 purple, pink 3, 2 red and 1 yellow skins. Blue is the worst, yellow the best. Skins have different conditions, the best is factory new, the worst - battle-scarred.
Players can sell or buy skins in the Steam community market. The most expensive equipment that was sold is M9 Bajonett Crimson Web knife with StatTrak. Somebody bought it for 23,000 $ There are only 4 knifes like this in the world. They don't give us nothing beyond appearance.
 

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Wysany: 2016-09-24, 20:49   

Sonmi napisa/a:

We don't have to have money to choose weapon.



We don't need any money to choose a weapon.

Sonmi napisa/a:

The person with the most points wins after 10 minutes.



Jakoś bardziej by mi pasowało: The Player with the best score is the winner of the round.

Sonmi napisa/a:

We can't buy weapon, we get it for killing.



We can't buy weapon, but we get it for killing other players.

Sonmi napisa/a:

The target is to eliminate the opposing team, or, in the case of terrorists detonate bomb, and in the case of CT - defuse it.



The objective of both teams is to eliminate the opposing team. But if you're terrorist, your team can win by detonate a bomb in restricted area. For Counter-Terrorist there is another way too. If terrorist plant the bomb, they can defuse the package and won the round.

Dalej nie mam czasu, bo muszę jeszcze ze śmieciami polecieć ;P. Od razu zaznaczam, że nie musi być super-dobrze, bo sam dawno prace pisałem w pełni luksusowym, szkolnym angielskim.
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Wysany: 2016-09-24, 21:01   

Boreae napisa/a:

But if you're terrorist, your team can win by detonate a bomb in restricted area.


But if you're a terrorist, your team can win by detonating a bomb in a restricted area.

Boreae napisa/a:

terrorist plant


terrorist plants/terrorists plant

Boreae napisa/a:

they can defuse the package and won the round.


counter terrorists can defuse the package and win the round.

Sonmi napisa/a:

russians


A jakby ktoś napisał "Polacy" z małej litery, to jaka by chryja była!


Błędów pewnie jest więcej, ale nie mam czasu.
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Wysany: 2016-09-24, 21:57   

Szej-Hulud napisa/a:

A jakby ktoś napisał "Polacy" z małej litery, to jaka by chryja była!


To akurat jest wzór mojej prezentacji ustnej, więc w wymowie może by tego nie usłyszeli :mrgreen:
Na piśmie faktycznie może urazić.

Dzięki, że zerknęliście chociaż tyle!
 

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Skd: Warszawa

   

Wysany: 2016-09-25, 14:40   

Nie jestem anglistą, ale spróbuję coś pomóc...

"Counter-Strike: Global Offensive (CS:GO) is a multiplayer, first person shooter game, released in 2012."

"We can kill people only from opposing team." - Napisałabym raczej "We can kill only our opponents.", jakoś tak zgrabniej mi się wydaje.

"We respawn after every death." - bez "s"

"The target is to eliminate the opposing team" - jak wyżej, zmieniłabym na "opponents"

"We can't buy any weapon there too."

"Weapons are rewards and we get them after every second kill." - i bez "the"

"The last reward we can get is a gold knife." - dodałam "reward", żeby było bardziej przejrzyście

"The person who first kills someone with the gold knife - wins."

"There are 15 rounds."

"Our task is to kill all enemies"

"In this mode we have a defuser and a bulletproof vest with a helmet for free."

"Every other weapon we can buy for money which we get for every round and every kill."

"The first team that wins 8 rounds is the winner. "

"Our objectives are the same as in Classic Casual mode." - to samo co wcześniej, nie "objectives", tylko "tasks"

"It's the only mode where we can kill our teammate and we can block each other." - bez "one"

"In competitive mode there are few maps where our task is to rescue the hostage and move it to CT base, or - if we're T, our task is not to allow the rescue of the hostage."

"Defusing without defuse kit takes 10 seconds, and with it - 5 seconds."

"It means we get ranked for how we play, not for how much we play."

"It's a prize for the best player of the round."

"We can get MVP for planting or defusing a bomb too."

"If we play bad, we fall from our rank." - "we", nie "we'll"

"We can't see our points, so we don't know when we'll get a new rank. "

"you can have hackers and smurfs in the enemy team"

"Smurf is a player who has a better rank on other Steam account. He plays with lower ranks from the second account. "

"For example we can't play ranked match only with 15 maps."

"It's very important to know every place on the map, teammates must communicate with each other."

"Players should know names of the places."

"But every team has 6 groups the in shop"

"Every weapon is different while using it." - ale coś mi nadal zgrzyta... napiszesz o co konkretnie chodziło Ci w tym zdaniu?

"Usually they cost about 2 euros per one."

"We can draw one out of"

"They give us nothing but appearance." - bez "don't"


Mam nadzieję, że wyłapałam wszystko, czego nie wyłapali poprzednicy. ;) Interpunkcji nie poprawiałam, bo już mi się nie chciało.
 

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Hella napisa/a:

"Every weapon is different while using it." - ale coś mi nadal zgrzyta... napiszesz o co konkretnie chodziło Ci w tym zdaniu?


Każda broń jest inna podczas jej używania. - coś w tym kierunku, chodzi o różną penetrację pancerza, odrzut itd.

Ogarniasz to z czym ja mam największy problem, czyli przedimki. :D Ale mam jedną wątpliwość:

Hella napisa/a:

"We can get MVP for planting or defusing a bomb too."


Bomba w rundzie jest tylko jedna, więc czy nie można użyć the?
 

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Doczya: 03 Sie 2014

Skd: Warszawa

   

Wysany: 2016-09-25, 16:35   

Muszę pomyśleć jakby to móc inaczej ująć, bo to już wymaga trochę bardziej zaawansowanego słownictwa.

Jeżeli już o tej konkretnej bombie wspominałaś w trakcie wypowiedzi, użyj "the". Jeśli wspominasz o niej po raz pierwszy - "a".
 

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