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swierkosia  

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Dołączyła: 21 Sty 2009

   

Wysłany: 2010-03-14, 17:12   PROBLEM Z B??DAMI....

Hej... Czy ktoś byłby tak miły i sprawdził mi błędy w pracy?? Niestety robię ich pełno, a przez to mam obniżone oceny... (duuużo)...

From: Zofia Gradecka [zosia@interia.pl]
To: The Professional Tennis School [professionallearn@tennis]
Subject: Information about courses

Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to ask for information about your tennis courses. I am especially interested in an intensive course four or five weeks. I am 17 and I study in the Liceum Ogólnokształcące at ZS in Milanów. I can’t play tennis. I never play professionally. I need to improve my trimming and prudence. I like stay out in the open so I want take advantage of free time.

I have looked your advertisement on the billboard, but there is no information about intensive courses next spring. Could you please send me information about dates and prices? I would also like some information about teachers. Where I could stay? I would like stay in the hotel or apartment building. My family is going to visit me for a weekend when I am at the tennis’s court. Could they stay with me in this room?


I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Zofia Gradecka



Z góry dziękuję... Bardzo...;) Pozdrawiam... :-)
:-)
 

Patka  

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Dołączyła: 06 Sty 2010

Skąd: Krk

   

Wysłany: 2010-03-14, 18:48   

swierkosia napisał/a:

I am writing to ask for information about your tennis courses.

I am writing to get informations about tennis courses.

swierkosia napisał/a:

I never play professionally.


I have never played professionally.

swierkosia napisał/a:

I like stay out in the open so I want take advantage of free time.

I would like to stay out in the open so i want to take adventage of free time.

swierkosia napisał/a:

but there is no information about intensive courses next spring.

...courses in the next spring.


swierkosia napisał/a:

Could you please send me information about dates and prices?

Could you send me information about dates and prices?

swierkosia napisał/a:

I would also like some information about teachers


I would like to also get some informations about teachers.

swierkosia napisał/a:

I would like stay in the hotel or apartment building.


I would like to stay....


chyba tyle.. :-)
 

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