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swierkosia  

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Dołączyła: 21 Sty 2009

   

Wysłany: 2010-01-29, 18:38   Sprawdzenie b??dów...:)

Hej :-) Mam wielki problem z pisanie prac po angielsku... Czy kto? móg?ny sprawdzi? ten tekst i pomóc mi w poprawi b??dów?? :-) Z góry dzi?kuj?... ;)

The place where I live

I live in Mystkowo, which is a village in the east of Poland. It has population of 100,000 people and it’s the second biggest borough in county.

It’s a beautiful village, and it’s great for relax and feel peaceful. There aren’t a lot of narrow and romantic streets but there are nice ponds and lakes. There is a river - Wkra. There are two churches too. In Mystkowo there’s a pub where people go there at the weekend to sit, dance, talk, drink beer and some juice and watch the TV.

The weather here is very different. The winter can be wet or warm. The same weather can be in summer, spring or autumn. It sometimes rains for days or nights. The summer is ordinarily hot and sunny and it’s great for swimming on lakes.

Mystkowo isn’t famous. There aren’t some tourists. The one of attraction in Mysktowo is stadium where people play football. There’s open party in June called Dni Mystkowa, with a lot of different attractions.

But I think the best things about Mystkowo are the people and the atmosphere. It’s very safe and friendly. I very like live here.
;) ;) ;)
 

Patka  

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Dołączyła: 06 Sty 2010

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Wysłany: 2010-01-29, 18:53   

swierkosia napisał/a:

drink beer and some juice and watch the TV.


wydaje mi si? ?e powinno by? bez 'the'

->drink beer and some juice and watch TV.
 

Frozy  

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The Destroyer



Wiek: 23

Dołączył: 16 Gru 2009

Skąd: Redania

   

Wysłany: 2010-01-29, 21:00   

dobrze ci si? wydaje :P

Cytat:

swimming on lakes.



a nie powinno by? w tym wypadku swimming in lakes?

[ Dodano: 2010-01-29, 21:03 ]

Cytat:

It’s very safe and friendly.



powinno chyba by?:

It's very safely and friendly
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Mariqua  

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Imię: Autodestrukcja

Dołączyła: 28 Gru 2009

   

Wysłany: 2010-01-29, 21:05   

Dlaczego tak du?o tego 'the' wstawiasz? Wsz?dzie the, the i the.
watch the TV. - zb?dne
The weather here is very different - zamiast tego napisa?abym raczej 'a'.
The winter can be wet or warm. - tutaj wyrzuci?abym the, a z winter zrobi?a liczb? mnog?
The summer is ordinarily hot and sunny - jak wy?ej
The one of attraction - znów zb?dne
But I think the best things about Mystkowo are the people and the atmosphere.
- to samo. nawet przed atmosphere 'an' bym da?a.

Cytat:

I very like live here.


I like very much powinno by?.

Cytat:

In Mystkowo there’s a pub where people go there


Przet?umacz to : w Mystkowie jest pub gdzie ludzie chodz? tam.
Powinno by? bez tego 'there'.
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Jestem wystarczaj?co dumna z tego, co jednak wiem, aby przyzna? z ca?? skromno?ci?, i? nie wiem wszystkiego
 

Frozy  

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The Destroyer



Wiek: 23

Dołączył: 16 Gru 2009

Skąd: Redania

   

Wysłany: 2010-01-29, 21:24   

Cytat:

a z winter zrobi?a liczb? mnog?



Lepiej zosta? przy pojedynczej :P
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See the black birds fly!
Let them hear your rage!
Show no fear!
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swierkosia  

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Dołączyła: 21 Sty 2009

   

Wysłany: 2010-02-05, 20:20   

Czyli mam rozumie?, ?e wi?cej b??dów nie ma?? :-) :-)
 

miksik  

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Imię: Krzysztof

Wiek: 29

Dołączył: 27 Paź 2008

Skąd: Szczecin

   

Wysłany: 2010-04-02, 01:33   Re: Sprawdzenie b??dów...:)

swierkosia napisał/a:


and watch the TV.
There aren’t some tourists.
It’s very safe and friendly.
I very like live here.



... and watch TV.
There aren't any tourists.
Przeczenie - piszemy any
It's very safely and friendly (place).
I like live here so much here.
Je?li lubisz 'tak bardzo' mieszka? w swym mie?cie
"Very like" jest niepoprawnegramatycznie
 

FroFro  

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Imię: Patrycja

Wiek: 52

Dołączyła: 11 Lis 2009

Skąd: Wielkopolska

   

Wysłany: 2010-04-08, 12:34   

The place where I live

I live in Mystkowo, which is a village in the east of Poland. It has population of 100,000 people and it’s the second biggest borough in county.

It’s a beautiful village, and it’s great for relax and feel peaceful. There aren’t a lot of narrow and romantic streets but there're nice ponds and lakes. There is a river - Wkra. There are two churches too. In Mystkowo there’s a pub where people go at the weekend to sit, dance, talk, drink beer and some juice and watch TV.

A weather here is very different. The winter can be wet or warm. A same weather can be in summer, spring or autumn. It sometimes rains for days or nights. The summer is ordinarily hot and sunny and it’s great for swimming in lakes.

Mystkowo isn’t famous. There aren’t any tourists. The one of attraction in Mysktowo is stadium where people play football. There’s open party in June called Dni Mystkowa, with a lot of different attractions.

But I think the best things about Mystkowo are the people and the atmosphere. It’s very safe and friendly. I like very much.
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Podkre?lam par? b??dów.

My?le,?e p?ywadz w jeziorze,a nie na jeziorze .
Tak?e piszesz I swimming in the lake,a nie on the lake.
Pozatym zamiast nadmiernej ilo?ci tego The mo?esz pisa?,?e W ZIMIE i stosowa? In winter to i tamto lub in summer i go to beach itp. .

[ Dodano: 2010-04-08, 12:34 ]
tam gdzie jest skopiowane poprawi?am to co wiedzia?am.
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Baw si? dobrze i pami?taj,?e najlepsza zabawa zaczyna si? po pó?nocy . ;dd

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