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The place where I live

I live in Mystkowo, which is a village in the east of Poland. It has population of 100,000 people and it’s the second biggest borough in county.

It’s a beautiful village, and it’s great for relax and feel peaceful. There aren’t a lot of narrow and romantic streets but there are nice ponds and lakes. There is a river - Wkra. There are two churches too. In Mystkowo there’s a pub where people go there at the weekend to sit, dance, talk, drink beer and some juice and watch the TV.

The weather here is very different. The winter can be wet or warm. The same weather can be in summer, spring or autumn. It sometimes rains for days or nights. The summer is ordinarily hot and sunny and it’s great for swimming on lakes.

Mystkowo isn’t famous. There aren’t some tourists. The one of attraction in Mysktowo is stadium where people play football. There’s open party in June called Dni Mystkowa, with a lot of different attractions.

But I think the best things about Mystkowo are the people and the atmosphere. It’s very safe and friendly. I very like live here.

wydaje mi się że powinno być bez 'the'

->drink beer and some juice and watch TV.

dobrze ci siÄ™ wydaje :P



a nie powinno być w tym wypadku swimming in lakes?

[ Dodano: 2010-01-29, 21:03 ]

Cytat:

It’s very safe and friendly.

powinno chyba być:

It's very safely and friendly

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See the black birds fly!
Let them hear your rage!
Show no fear!
ATAAAAAAAAACK!" - Amon Amarth

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Dlaczego tak dużo tego 'the' wstawiasz? Wszędzie the, the i the.
watch the TV. - zbędne
The weather here is very different - zamiast tego napisałabym raczej 'a'.
The winter can be wet or warm. - tutaj wyrzuciłabym the, a z winter zrobiła liczbę mnogą
The summer is ordinarily hot and sunny - jak wyżej
The one of attraction - znów zbędne
But I think the best things about Mystkowo are the people and the atmosphere.
- to samo. nawet przed atmosphere 'an' bym dała.


I like very much powinno być.

Cytat:

In Mystkowo there’s a pub where people go there

Przetłumacz to : w Mystkowie jest pub gdzie ludzie chodzą tam.
Powinno być bez tego 'there'.

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Mózg jest najbardziej przecenianym z ludzkich organów. - Woody Allen

Jestem wystarczająco dumna z tego, co jednak wiem, aby przyznać z całą skromnością, iż nie wiem wszystkiego

Lepiej zostać przy pojedynczej :P

_________________
"Raise your swords up high!
See the black birds fly!
Let them hear your rage!
Show no fear!
ATAAAAAAAAACK!" - Amon Amarth

http://www.formspring.me/Frozy1919

Czyli mam rozumieć, że więcej błędów nie ma??

... and watch TV.
There aren't any tourists.
Przeczenie - piszemy any
It's very safely and friendly (place).
I like live here so much here.
Jeśli lubisz 'tak bardzo' mieszkać w swym mieście
"Very like" jest niepoprawnegramatycznie

The place where I live

I live in Mystkowo, which is a village in the east of Poland. It has population of 100,000 people and it’s the second biggest borough in county.

It’s a beautiful village, and it’s great for relax and feel peaceful. There aren’t a lot of narrow and romantic streets but there're nice ponds and lakes. There is a river - Wkra. There are two churches too. In Mystkowo there’s a pub where people go at the weekend to sit, dance, talk, drink beer and some juice and watch TV.

A weather here is very different. The winter can be wet or warm. A same weather can be in summer, spring or autumn. It sometimes rains for days or nights. The summer is ordinarily hot and sunny and it’s great for swimming in lakes.

Mystkowo isn’t famous. There aren’t any tourists. The one of attraction in Mysktowo is stadium where people play football. There’s open party in June called Dni Mystkowa, with a lot of different attractions.

But I think the best things about Mystkowo are the people and the atmosphere. It’s very safe and friendly. I like very much.
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Podkreślam parę błędów.

Myśle,że pływadz w jeziorze,a nie na jeziorze .
Także piszesz I swimming in the lake,a nie on the lake.
Pozatym zamiast nadmiernej ilości tego The możesz pisać,że W ZIMIE i stosować In winter to i tamto lub in summer i go to beach itp. .

[ Dodano: 2010-04-08, 12:34 ]
tam gdzie jest skopiowane poprawiłam to co wiedziałam.