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Wysłany: 2009-05-31, 10:49 angielski
Witam :P chcialbym aby ktos mi sprawdził opowiadanie z angielskiego, wiem ze sa błedy dlatego chciałbym o poprawe :D
Last wonderful summer, in September, our class went to the Tatra mountains. The day was lovely, the sun was shining and it was quite hot. We went with the whole class and our English teacher. We were very excited and full of energy. We started walking through the forest and it was not so tiring and we were talking all the time. We decided that it is better to be at the end of the group because we could admire the views. Then we started climbing and we saw a strange plant so we stopped for a moment to take some pictures. Suddenly we realized that we could not see the rest of our class! We were lost! At first we were shocked and we did not know what to do byt then we decided that we should follow the path. We were walking fast for about a half of an hour and finally we saw our class. They were having a rest and eating sandwitches. Our teacher was very angry and she shouted at us and she told us that we aer irresponsible. We had to walk with her all the time. We felt stupid and we could not talk freely because she was listening all the time. The last 3 hours af our trip were boring and we did not have fun. I felt dissapointed and I was a bit angry that she forced us to walk with her. I hope that the next trip will be better
Last wonderful summer, in September, our class went to the Tatra mountains. The day was lovely, the sun was shining and it was quite hot. We went with the whole class and our English teacher. We were very excited and full of energy. We started walking through the forest and it was not so tiring and we were talking all the time. We decided that it is better to be at the end of the group because we could admire the views. Then we started climbing and we saw a strange plant so we stopped for a moment to take some pictures. Suddenly we realized that we could not see the rest of our class! We were lost! At first we were shocked and we did not know what to do byt then we decided that we should follow the path. We were walking fast for about a half of an hour and finally we saw our class. They were having a rest and eating sandwitches. Our teacher was very angry and she shouted at us and she told us that we aer irresponsible. We had to walk with her all the time. We felt stupid and we could not talk freely because she was listening all the time. The last 3 hours af our trip were boring and we did not have fun. I felt dissapointed and I was a bit angry that she forced us to walk with her. I hope that the next trip will be better
Ostatnio zmieniony przez panpe 2009-05-31, 15:47, w cało¶ci zmieniany 1 raz
Wysłany: 2009-05-31, 13:43
panpe napisał/a:
to the mouintains
ładniej by było, gdybyś podał/a nazwę gór, np. to the Tatra mountains.
panpe napisał/a:
and a bit angry
and I was a bit angry.
Ja bym zmieniła tylko to.
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¯yjesz wystarczająco długo by usłyszeć głos broni,
Wystarczająco długo by odnaleźć siebie krzyczącego każdej nocy,
Wystarczająco długo by zobaczyć jak przyjaciele cię zdradzają...
¯yjesz wystarczająco długo by usłyszeć głos broni,
Wystarczająco długo by odnaleźć siebie krzyczącego każdej nocy,
Wystarczająco długo by zobaczyć jak przyjaciele cię zdradzają...
Wysłany: 2009-05-31, 15:48
ok zmienione :P thx za pomoc Jakby ktoś jeszcze cos widział to pisac 