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Doł±czyła: 27 Sty 2010

Sk±d: Lubin

   

Wysłany: 2010-03-18, 16:34   j. angielski... proszÄ™ o pomocc...

Tematem pracy miał był opis jakiegoś ciekawego zawodu. Napisałam o astronautach, prosiłabym o poprawienie błędów gramatycznych, stylistycznych i wszystkich innych...

The people are always interested in the cosmos.
A person, who helps us learn about the cosmos is an astronaut. His job is flying into space and to get to know space.
Astronauts have special suits. They must have a cylinder of oxygen, because space heven't oxygen.
These people travel in a special shuttle fly.
Astronauts have different tsaks: fly in the planets, a repair satelites and do measurements.
The first astronaut, who flew to the moon was Jurij Gagarin - it was 59 years ago!
Astronauts have to pass a many tests, to fly into space.
These people must be courageous, physically fit and intelligent.
This is a very dangerous proffesion, because there are cases sometimes.

To bardzo dla mnie ważne, z góry dziękuję za pomoc... :)
 

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Doł±czyła: 06 Sty 2010

Sk±d: Krk

   

Wysłany: 2010-03-18, 16:54   

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Astronauts have different tsaks


-tasks

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fly in the planets, a repair satelites and do measurements


-fly among the planets, repair satelites and make measurements.

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These people travel in a special shuttle fly.


...travel in space ships.

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Astronauts have to pass a many tests, to fly into space.


-Astronauts have to pass many tests to fly into space.
 

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Doł±czył: 07 Mar 2010

Sk±d: Katowice

   

Wysłany: 2010-03-19, 18:17   

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The people are always interested in the cosmos.


The ppl were always interested in space/cosmos

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His job is flying into space and to get to know space


His job is to fly into space and get to know it

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because space heven't oxygen.


Because there is no oxygen in space.

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These people travel in a special shuttle fly.


Those ppl travel in a space shuttle

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The first astronaut, who flew to the moon was Jurij Gagarin - it was 59 years ago!


Gagarin nie był na księzycu, był pierwszym człowiekiem w kosmosie ;-)

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This is a very dangerous proffesion, because there are cases sometimes.


...because there were accidents/crashes
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