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Czy ktoś mógłby mi sprawdzić bardzo streszczoną biografię Coco Chanel?
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Coco Chanel was a french fashion designer, who changed the woman's trend. She made clothes with a simple,sports style and short dresses. Coco was a parisian icon of haute couture. She made perfums too - Chanel. No.5, which are still popular. Her fantastic ideas; knitted fabric costumes and dresses, originals haircuts,golfs,jewellery( long nackles of pearls and plastic jewelry), ''little black dress'', bell bottoms, trench coats ... Every women was enthusiastic of these ideas.

Coco Chanel ( in fact Gabrielle Bonheur Chanel) was born in 19 of august in Saumur. She had two sisters and three brothers. Gabrielle spended 6 years in an orphanage.

In 1913 she opened a shop with hats and women's clothes, 6 years later already famous, she opened a couture house with a mark Chanel.
Gabrielle died, when she was 88 years old, in Paris, in 10 of January, 1971.

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I tylko tyle? Nie ma już żadnych błędów?

Wydaje mi się, że jest OK,
jedynie zastanawiam sie nad tym zdaniem :

-She made clothes in simple,sports style and..
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To dzięki wielkie .

Temat do zamknięcia ; D.