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Wysłany: 2010-04-26, 21:15 sprawdzenie tekstu
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I was walking through the wood with Sandra and Ania. It was a magic winter evening. I comed there, because I wanted to have some fun with my friends…
So when we reached a big, covered in snow glade, we started flinging snowball. It was really zanily ! We made a cute snowman too. Sandra even brought a carrot for his nose and I - two buttons for his eyes. Ania said “ He could be my boyfriend “. We burst out laughing. I made some nice photos.
While we were returning, I unhappily fell down. I felt a terrible pain in my knee. I saw a big rend in the jeans and in the tights too. I saw something red … I couldn’t look at this. From my injury was seeping(chodzi mi o to, ĹĽe krew sÄ…czyĹ‚a siÄ™) a lot of blood. I was really horrified and I started to cry …. My scared friends helped me ace in my house.
When I arrived to home and my mum saw me , she called immediately the ambulance.
I had only a little operation, but I felt a lot of pain …
Today this incident is for me only a distant mention, but I will remember that for the rest of my life…
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Wysłany: 2010-04-27, 09:30
donna_rossetto napisał/a:
the wood
ja bym dała tu forest
donna_rossetto napisał/a:
I comed there
I came there
donna_rossetto napisał/a:
zanily
a co to znaczy?
donna_rossetto napisał/a:
From my injury was seeping a lot of blood
A lots of blood was dripping out from my injury.
donna_rossetto napisał/a:
My scared friends helped me ace in my house.
To zdanie nie ma sensu. Co chciałaś tu napisać?
donna_rossetto napisał/a:
mum
mom
donna_rossetto napisał/a:
I had only a little operation, but I felt a lot of pain …
I only had a small operation
To chyba tyle.
Poza tym praca dobra
21.09.2009 11:35 52cm 3625g
Wysłany: 2010-04-27, 09:45
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donna_rossetto napisał/a:
My scared friends helped me ace in my house.
To zdanie nie ma sensu. Co chciałaś tu napisać?
No ... ¯e moje przestraszone przyjaciółki pomogły mi się dostać do domu .
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Wysłany: 2010-04-27, 18:04
donna_rossetto napisał/a:
Zanily to znaczy zabawnie :)
Z jakiego słownika korzystałaś?
Cytat:
No ... ¯e moje przestraszone przyjaciółki pomogły mi się dostać do domu .
Zwrot 'get into'.
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